Question #1:
Ugh...what do you think of my writing?
Okay, this is the beginning of some story I'm never going to work on again. However, it's a good example of my writing style, which is what I want critiqued here. Again, I want your opinions on my writing, not the story!Please refrain from simple answers like, "It's good!" "It sucks!" "You fail at life, go die!" I'd like to know the reasoning behind your thoughts. :3 (Also, this is a first draft, so I expect you to find mistakes.)
Here goes:
I kicked off my shoes as I entered the room and fell onto the couch. My face landed in a pillow; I didn’t even bother to move from the mildly uncomfortable position. It had been a long day, a very long day, and all I really wanted to do was spend the next ten hours being dead to the world.
“Kylie!”
I groaned as a very energetic twelve-year-old landed on my back and started shaking my shoulders. I tried to swat him away, but my pitiful attempts failed to bring the desired result.
“Jake, go away,” I mumbled into the pillow. “I’m not in the mood.”
“Come on, Ky, you told me we’d go play soccer tonight,” he whined.
I rolled over and glowered up at him. He was a heartbreaker in the making, with wild brown hair that refused to be tamed and large blue eyes that looked completely innocent, even when he was in the middle of replacing your shampoo with a ketchup-mustard-soy sauce combo.
“Can’t we go tomorrow?” I complained.
Jake shook his head and grabbed me by the wrists to haul me to my feet. I went limp to hamper him with dead weight, but he compromised by dragging me off the couch to the space between the dust ruffle and the coffee table. I stayed there, immobile, not caring that my face was mashed into the carpet and the leg of the table.
“Nooooooo,” I droned.
“Yeessssss,” he answered, now pulling my ankles. “I’ll drag you out to the car!”
“Don’t you dare touch my car,” I warned him. “Keep your fingers off my Camaro.”
He immediately let go of my ankles and began backing toward the door.
“I’m gonna put fingerprints all over the windshield,” he told me. “And I’m gonna dump that weird bowl of mac’n’cheese in the back of the fridge in your backseat!”
I was on my feet in an instant, tackling him to the ground as he turned and made for the kitchen. We wrestled on the carpet for a minute or so before I pinned him to the floor with my six years of extra weight.
“Okay, okay, fine,” I panted as he lay obediently underneath me. “Go get the ball while I change.”
“Okay!” he replied happily. He leapt to his feet and darted to his room when I released him.
I made my way more slowly to my bedroom, my feet aching from my sixth night in a row of working. The last thing I really wanted to do that evening was to play soccer with my hyperactive little brother, but it was either that or come home on the night of our parents’ return from vacation to find the house completely trashed and my butt on the line. With much weariness, I shed my work clothes and pulled on instead a pair of gym shorts and an old t-shirt that was already covered in grass stains from past excursions to the soccer field.
“All right, pooper-scooper, let’s go!” I called as I strode down the hall. He emerged from the kitchen, piece of cold pizza in hand, while I was slipping on my sneakers.
“Uh-uh, put it back,” I said, pointing to the kitchen. “I’m not letting Mom and Dad chew me out because you couldn’t keep your paws out of the leftovers.”
“Aw, come on, Ky!”
“No. Eat an apple if you’re that hungry. Go, put it back.”
He groaned and dragged his feet back into the kitchen. I watched him return the pizza to its box and come back to the entryway before I opened the door and ushered him onto the driveway.
@Veronica: Of course it's boring. It's a brother and sister arguing about playing soccer...that's not exactly something people pay money to see. XD Content isn't the point here, structure is.
@*MissUndead41: I have to admit, "badass" is not a way my writing is typically described. XD Thanks!
@J: You're right. I can totally see where the dialogue needs work. Thanks for pointing that out; I'll keep an eye on it. :3
@smkeller: Thank you. :3
@XXsailorsaturnXX: I know it's boring. Not everything I write is dull, this is just supposed to be an example of my writing style. X3 But thank you!
By the way, could all future answerers please give me advice on how to make my writing better? I only have myself as an editor, and I'm a bit biased. ^^;
@Lindsay: Yeah, Jake should probably be eight or ten; I'm not good with writing young kids at the proper age. It's why I don't usually have characters under the age of fifteen. D: Of course, my brother is twenty-one and still acts like Jake, so I probably had him in mind when writing this. XD
Del, I missed you! I love your critiques. :3
You warned me about overwriting last time; I guess I didn't listen! I'll definitely try to be wary of it from now on.
This actually has a short preface that pretty much told the reader it was going to be some sort of dark fantasy, but I didn't like it, so I didn't bother to include the thing.
Question #2:
TNA Impact Episode 10 Rate the Show (Part 1)?
-A Final Resolution package airs with still photographs of what went down at the PPV.-Footage is shown from earlier today of a press conference that took place. At the press conference they announce the main event for the next PPV, Against All Odds, which will be Jeff Jarrett defending his NWA World title against Kevin Nash. Jarrett talks and says every PPV that TNA has had, the bar has been raised even more, and he will do his job at Against All Odds to continue that trend. Jarrett says Nash's focus is not on wrestling like him. Nash is more worried about outside projects like movies. Nash says the PPV is called Against All Odds because the odds are against Jarrett beating him. Talks about being bigger and stronger than Jarrett. Nash says he is in the best shape of his life, and he talks about all the belts he has had in the past. Nash says with the belt comes money and more money, and he says that is why he's here. He's about business. Someone claiming to be from USA Today wants a picture taken of them face to face, and they do so. Don West asks Jarrett how he will compensate for Nash's height advantage? Jarrett says they are all the same size when they are on their back. Bill Banks asks Nash about how he says it's all about money, but what about winning the NWA Title for the first time in his career? Nash says with that comes money. Nash says he guarantees right now Jeff is the highest paid guy, and he wants that and wants that belt. Nash then utters a line right out of In Living Color, saying, "More money, more money, more money." DDP is in the audience in the press room and asks a question next. DDP asks since they are both supposed to be the Kings of Wrestling, and Jarrett calls himself the King of the Mountain, what's that make Kev, his Queen? Jarrett says, if the shoe fits, wear it. Nash says maybe those two would like to stick around for an autograph. Nash says to Jarrett the only thing he has to worry about with this size 16 is maybe if he sticks it up his ass. Both men then rise to their feet. Jarrett says, "All press conferences have to end in tension, huh?" Nash pushes Jarrett and then security gets in the middle of them to break things up.
Buck Quartermain vs. Christopher Daniels
Quartermain starts off on the offense getting in a back elbow and a scoop slam. He follows that up with two elbow drops. Quartermain then with a front suplex. Quartermain then goes for a leg drop off the middle rope, but Daniels moves out of the way. Daniels follows that up with an enziguri. Daniels then with a big clothesline. Daniels then with a reverse DDT into a face buster for the win.
Winner: Christopher Daniels
-Daniels gets on the mic afterwards. He says he's tired of the protecting and the favortism from Dusty Rhodes. He says he's talking to the poster boy, AJ Styles. Daniels wonders why he, the most talented man in the X Division, can't have a title shot with him? Daniels says on his best day, AJ knows he can't beat him. Styles comes out on the ramp. Styles questions how he is protected? He says he's a fighting champion. Styles says anytime, anyplace. Daniels says what about this time, this place. Daniels says he's up to another match tonight, and Daniels says he wants to give Styles 10 minutes in the ring to shut his mouth. If Styles wins, Daniels says he will walk away. Daniels says if Styles can't beat him, he wants the title shot at Against All Odds. Dusty Rhodes comes out and officially agrees to the stipulations that the two men have just set, and we have our main event for Impact.
Lex Lovett vs. Jeff Hardy
Lovett slaps Hardy at the beginning. Hardy tackles Lovett and works him over in the corner with some punches and kicks. Lovett fights back with a couple punches but it goes nowhere. Hardy ducks a clothesline and hits a reverse facebuster. Hardy with the sunset flip but Lovett fights out. Hardy goes for the Twist of Fate and nails it, but it ends in more of a Stone Cold Stunner position. Hardy then goes up top and hits the Swanton Bomb for the pinfall.
Winner: Jeff Hardy
-Abyss runs out after the match and attacks Hardy from behind. Abyss nails his Black Hole Slam on Hardy. Abyss then throws Lovett out of the ring. Abyss stands over the fallen Jeff Hardy. Abyss leaves the ring, but then decides to head back for the ring. Abyss sets up a table on the outside of the ring. Abyss gets back in the ring. Hardy tries to fight him off from his knees. Abyss lifts Hardy into the air in a press slam position, and he throws Hardy over the top rope to the outside through the table.
-Jeremy Borash and Shane Douglas talk about some features on tnawrestling.com. They also plus some new merchandise, including the first ever TNA 3 hour PPV event, Victory Road, coming soon to DVD.
Question #3:
where can i find red and black nike freek wrestling shoe?
Question #4:
Wrestling shoes are worn out?
My shoes are worn out from the bottom ,right beneath my toes, i was wondering how do i tape them up and with what type of tape? I have some latex free water proof adhesive tape but i don't think that'll work. I'd appreciate any tips/adviceQuestion #5:
kinda like Samson in the Bible?
has anyone ever had this type of temptation i had been getting? Here it is, I'll tell you.There are a few female friends I have that are not godly and I had been tempted to call up and get together with them. I had been fighting with this the past few months. I had called up one of them many months ago and I asked her to have tea with me. So we planned it one day, but then she cancelled due to work commitments. Now I was glad because the temptation wore off later on eventually. But it does keep coming back. I was hoping I meet a godly girl real soon that I can hang out with and get to know. Maybe that can help.
There is a girl at my college Bible study group that I had an interest for nearly 2 years. For a long time that I have had the interest in her, I had been thinking of her as a no hope for me. I haven't had the chance to really talk to her and so I have given up hope. I was thinking, if only I got the chance to be her close friend and be able to ask her to get together one day, it'll really help me in this temptation I am having so I don't go thinking about these unsaved girls. One day however, I was emboldened to ask her for her phone number, which she gave me. The past month that I had been calling her, I ended up hanging out with her in get together lunch meetings which we had done 2x already. So I thought, finally I can deal with this temptation problem of hooking up with ungodly girls.
But then now, I am tempted again to start calling that same unsaved girl again and ask them to hang out. I am just getting the push to play with this girl's heart, and i don't really want to. I had found a godly girl already that I know I am serious about, though me and her are not courting yet and are still getting to know each other, but now this other girl is distracting me. It's hard for me to avoid her, I keep wrestling with the thoughts of calling her up and trying to get her to hook up with me. Now I had learned something, being married or having a courting partner will not save you from this temptation, only God can. But despite that knowledge, resisting this temptation is difficult.
So I ask, is there anyone here who is or knows someone that was in my shoes? What happened next? Maybe a similar story can help me out. I really don't wanna be like Samson from the book of Judges
this is a Romans 7 experience like Paul described from his own
Question #6:
Which Wrestling Shoe?
Should I get the Dan Gable Throwback shoes or the Dan Gable Ultimate 2's or any other shoe?Question #7:
does puma have wrestling shoes?
need a fresh pair of wrestling shoes. ive seen puma shoes at tournaments, but i cant find them online. post a link if u canQuestion #8:
Do you think there is something wrong with my family?
I am a 14 year old boy starting highschool and its been a while that i have felt like there is something wrong with my family. I have a brother age 12 a dad age 46 and a mom i think 43 or 44 idk, all together (no devoce or anything) and 3 dogs. Probably stating middle school (6th grade) i have felt like they wernt the same i dont know if its alywas been like this and im just getting old enough to see it or it it just stated happening. I want to start off with my brother and I.For years my brother and i where kinda half and half some times we got along and sometimes we didnt like i always wanted to play and have fun with him and he did noughting but watch tv so i always tried making him laugh poking him acting retarded etc.... not being mean but whenever i started getting the giggles he thought i was laughing at him and told my mom then sheed yell at me and i was always getting in trouble because he always told on me for retarded things that i did. one time me and him where on the couch and he had a plate of chips and the dog was siffing them and i called him over i knew he would knock over the chips but i didnt what to be mean i wanted my brother to get kinda "happymad" then wrestle or something and the dog climed over my brother and knocked the chips on the floor i though it was funny but he flipped and started screaming i dont know why and the dog is just going to eat the chips off the floor anyway then i offered to get him some new chips and he just goes and tells my mom again and she always makes a scene and made me whipe the entire couch down. then today my family got into a agument and me and my brother came into my room and i told my brother just egnor them and i told him that dad might want us to get ice cream because thats what he said he was going to do after dinner and i told my brother just say you dont want any and hes like WHY!!!!! and i said jeese fatty with a smile and he gets up and yells god so loud and slams his door and i was thinking to my self what the hell lol and me and my friends joke about weight all the time and eating and being fat when no one is and no one even cares. so i try to make him open the door and he wouldnt so i dont know what his problem is. to me it seems like he is always lazy and wants me to do all the work and wants my mom to kiss his ass which she does. and really stupid things like if i by accident step on his shoe or something he yells god!!!! really loud GOD JOEY!! AHAHAH i think he does it just to get my moms attention.
but now i wana talk about my mom.
My mom and i always always fight. she thinks i dont respect her because i am taller that her and bigger shes liike 5-2 and im 5-10. She always punishes me more than my brother and takes his side always and looks at him as a little kid. so im going to give you a few examples. one day during this summer we went to chicago to visit my moms sister and the day befor that i asked my dad if my mom was going to stay or leave he siad idk and must have asked my mom so then she comes screaming to me WHY DID YOU TELL DAD I ALWAYS LEAVE WHEN WE GO ON VACATION!!!! i said i didnt so we had to sit down as a family and my mom said my dad is trying to break my mom and i up and it was a long night and befor that we were watching tv my dad was drunk and fed the dog. (this dog is a police dog and my mom doesnt want people feading him cause he will get fat) and so guess what she did knot give two shits about my dad feeding the dog a fudge stick so i get my like a piece of somthing and fed the puppy and she just went off and she was pissed. i started yelling back because i saw her look at my dad while he was feeding the dog but thinks its ok to yell at me for the same thing. so i told her im not taking this crap you try to give me and my dad gets ups and trys to grab me and so help me god i was about to hit him in the drunk ass face if he was going to take my mom side or try to grab me. im not a violent person am im not crazy im just not going to take that bull when it just happended and i just saw it and she tries to deny it. so i ended up leaving the house and going on a walk after my dad said just forget about it. thats anouther think i dont like he just gives up and sais fine. so i left and started walking on my regulat jogging route and just wanted to get some fresh air and so he drives up and makes me getin and talk. so i didnt talk to him at all and we drove home. then we had to talk as a family agian.
That night i started thinking. it seems like whatever my brother and i like they take away. first it was eating by the tv. that lasted a year. now he could not care less. after the tv it was bed time. now he does not care after betime it was keeping the door shup on my room cause our puppy always pees and litterly eates whatever is in my room. so i shut my door and he said the dogs are apart of our family too and so i respect it like all the other rules they make but then my brother decied to push the bounds.
Question #9:
Do you think I'm violent?
Deeply personal problem of mine- I don't know if I'm violent or not. I'm a 17 year old guy, near Phoenix. I'm kind of a goody two shoes now, but I wasn't always- I have a larger collection of fight scars than anyone else I know. I even have the nickname "Jasper", because my friends who are girls noticed the scars once when I took my shirt off for a pool party. I've been involved in everything from small, violent fights to nearly full-out riots. I've seen, and occasionally sent, several people sent to the hospital for months at a time. I technically don't fight savagely- I don't throw elbows, or knee anyone. The one time I cut loose in a fight was when an opponent pulled a collapsible baton out when fighting a friend of mine- I dislocated his arm and elbowed him in the throat, after spraining the wrist and coming near to breaking the arm of his friend who was fighting me at the time. I can be brutal if I wanted to- once a friend saw me do it when padded in a martial arts sparring round, and started immediately calling me Jason Bourne- it stuck with my guy friends. They won't even wrestle with me now lol. Now when I hear a fight and go to watch, it's abruptly cut off. Having never been punished (I'm good at escaping blame- just don't throw the first punch or be obvious about provoking them), and being good at what I do, I have a very bad reputation among a good half of my classmates- the other's don't even know me. I've had 6 years of martial arts, and learned how to use a sword, staff, knife, etc if ever necessary.Yet at the same time I'm gentle. I don't start fights, and actually my reputations for fighting mainly comes from me putting an end to fights. I'm completely respectful and nice to people and enjoy doing so. I'm a pretty good student, listen to teachers, never argue or anything with them, learned two extra languages, etc. I haven't even been in a fight in nearly 2 years. I even am extremely nostalgic and have come close to tears even in the movies (Con Air and Toy Story 3 were the closest lol)
I don't really know if I'm violent or not. When I sleep 90% of the time the dreams change from leaning in to kiss a girl I like to spinning, duck and relentlessly hammering away an opponent. Yet I don't feel the particular urge to start a fight. What do you think? Oh and sorry about the length lol
Question #10:
How to REPORT sexual harassment & discrimination in a public High school to the media?
I want this story to be on the news so it might make the school change its waysA local high school has many sexual discrimination and harassment by teachers and I am concerned here is the story.
I graduated last year from this school this school it has a J-ROTC which in my junior year had a LARGE (very tall and buff) black man who taught the Let 2's (2nd year J-ROTC students) and he would slap kids on the butt like the coaches in movies but it seemed to be random kids and it disturbed them. It was this mans first year there and last! In my senior year this older man took his place as the Let 2 teacher and he is the one who started problems. You see my junior year I was in the rifle and saber team and all teams where co-ed except for the Physical fitness (but they where still all trained together even though the competitions where separate) and when this old guy came He would NOT let females join the saber team and then the Drill team he refused to let girls in the armed exhibition Males where to be in the armed exhibition and females in unarmed well females have always been either half or more of the armed exhibition team and at this school there had never been an unarmed team. So I believe he noticed that the girls where a big part and said well we won't have a drill team until the 2nd semester (I believe hoping to get the girls to lose interest) then when 2nd semester came there where not enough people to even make one drill team (they usually had 2 an A team made of more experienced people and a B team usually for new people. NOT separated by sex). He would also make very may sexual discrimination comments every time a girl tried to make a point or something commonly saying “ I make my wife walk 2 steps behind” and such. Now later that year the LET 1 teacher sexual harassed students in the class by making rude comments such as "you have to go through (persons name) if you go through (towns name)" while making sexual positions he even went as far as drawing peoples male private parts and breast on the board comparing them to other people and ect. Saying some guys had tiny penises and saying the kids name and some girls had lopped sided breast and saying the kids name as well. He also drew stick like people on the board saying who they where and then drawing (male ejaculation) on the stick persons and saying this was there future ect. So he quite before the investigation was finished so the charges would be dropped and the investigation stopped so no records would be made (apparently that is the way schools are if you quite before the investigation is over the investigation is stopped and disappears).
Now I won’t lie I was very surprised by this because this man seemed like the last man to do such a thing and I think he kept sexual discrimination a bay in the J-ROTC and now that a new year is almost here the J-ROTC is requiring any members of it to be on a team they have never needed to do this before plus J-ROTC is one of the few school electives that don’t cost and team practice is before or after school but I am concerned that this is an attempted to get enough males to make a drill and saber team without females and force females into a separate and lesser teams that are under the Old man’s (the new LET 2 Teacher) control he controls the saber and drill and this year I believe the color guard team.
Also if this helps females in the school are not allowed into welding classes and in wrestling are forced to be “trainers” which just mop mats and take care of the boys during practice.
Also this school graduates on a football field and use to have a rule where women HAD to where white high heel shoes to grad or they couldn’t walk and a white dress or skirt under the gown last year they didn’t require heels and would let girls wear short white Kaprees (not sure how to spell it sorry) while guys Had to wear black slacks and black dress shoes as always. Well last year I finally got all of that revoked (the WHOLE dress code for males and females) because
1 it is one a foot ball field which causes grass stains so why should girl get nice shoes just to be ruined
2 I like to wear pants I had plenty of slacks that where black I don’t wear white and
3 why should it matter what you wear to YOUR graduation it is under a robe so who is going to see
I live in Oklahoma (the central area), what would most likely be the best news station to contact?
Question #11:
where can i buy nike freek wrestling shoes?
i am looking to buy these shoes but i can't find them availible anywhere.Question #12:
Why do people try to dictate what their favorite wrestler does with their life?
I don't know about you but I hate it when people say like they should go to tna, they should go to wwe,I actually read a comment on hbk's second youtube vid that said come back to your real family, how rude is that? Why do people care where a wrestler wrestles and gets mad where they choose. People say Jeff Hardy was made by wwe and that's his home but wasn't he a backyard wrestler that makes him a self-made wrestler if you think about, people have said Evan Bourne should go to tna and tag with Motorcity Machine Guns because their attire is the same, well here's a fact of the day if you haven't met Evan Bourne or read wwe magazine ever his mom has made his attire since he started wrestling school. The point of being wrestler is to jump at any chance youget to wrestle, jeff and matt hardy missed their prom to prove that fact. WWE provides that booking where you get to wrestle. I'm just wondering how would you feel if you were in shawn michael's shoes, for 25 years he broke his back and legs for us,he spent time away from his attractive wife and his children, granted you people wouldn't feel sad if he was back, he'd probably just be returning from that break he takes after mania so really during the 3-4 days he left they say raw isn't good wihout if he didn't leave he'd be on his break anyway. Shawn Michaels I respect him, hell I have a dream to wrestle him at mania(I'm training to be a wrestler). If you were true fan of somebody you'd watch them wrestle anywhere even if it was at mcdonalds, these people risk their lives for us and do they even personally know you, nope. They're over 18,you're not a parental guidance over them, they should be able to do whatever the hell the want IMHO
Question #13:
Custom wrestling shoes out there?
I was wondering if anyone knew if there are any websites where you can customize your own wrestling shoe and then buy it?Question #14:
What was your favorite part of TNA last night?
Mine was when Ric flairs butt got exposed and when he was wrestling in just underwear and a sock and shoeBQ- What do you think of Orlando Jordan, and what did you do when he started sucking his finger.
Question #15:
Supra Shoes Please Help!!?
THE ONLY REASON IM ASKING THIS QUESTION IN WRESTLING SECTION IS BECAUSE YOU GUYS GIVE THE BEST ANSWERS!!When you buy Supra's, are you supposed to keep the tags on them?? Is it cool to keep them on the shoe, or is it corny?? I see a lot of celebs and a lot of people I know who own Supra's and people on YouTube that do reviews on Supra's keep the tags on them. But I want to know if it would be corny, or if it's actually cool... What do you think?? And if you actually own a pair of Supra Skytops (1 or 2), how do you lace them up?? I have the Supra Vaiders, Skytop 1 and Skytop 2... I want to know how to lace them up cool. Thanks!!
Question #16:
I had a crazy dream last night what could it mean?
and the past few nights....I've been dreaming about friends and acquaintances from the past quite a bit these last few nights....last night I was at a sort of amusement park/waterpark/ tiki bar (in the dream) and it was all really wierd....it jsut didn't seem that fun at all......there was this huge like pinkish, light purple rollercoaster track goin in like an odd loop just above my head....but there was no trains coming through.....and it was built on top of this really shallow pool......I could only see it from one angle.....then I started walking and came up to the tiki bar and this kid who I wasnt really friends with but knew from back in the day was the bartender....he seeme really frantic and stressed out....I got some kind of daquiri and made my way to where an old friend was just standing around....he seemed rather bored and worried about something....it was all very wierd.And the other night....I had a dream that two of my old friends were wrestling around....then one of them starting punching the other furiously for like 10-15 seconds....and then the fight was over....I looked down and there was little pieces of foam that looked like they could have been boneless bbq sparerib tips form a chinese restaurant all over the floor...an for some reason I knew they came from the kid who got punched shoes....it was a mess so I just got out of there.
What the hell, if anything, does all this mean?
Question #17:
dream interpretation need help?
i always have dreams that im in my old neighborhood which were filled with project buildings, the thing is the entire neighborhood was demolished years ago, theres nothing but grass and dirt and my old school and a gated apartment building for the elderly (<= you may think this info is irrelevant but i think the details are important to understand better) for some reason im always at my grandmother's house. im rarely in my own house. this time i woke up all of the lights were out and it was early in the morning (i dont even wake up at that time) i was walking in house shoes that made loud clapping sounds i looked out the window and people were putting these bright colored red and yellow bags on the trunk of the trees(<= i have no idea of what that meant) this is where it gets even stranger i walked in the hallway, and at the end of the hallway near my grandmother's room i started wrestling and fighting with my sister and trey songz was standing in front of the tv flipping through the channels he looked at us and started singing a chicago dance mix song called wolf p*ssy (<= i have no idea why it was that song i dont even like that song) then i woke up... that was the weirdest dream i ever had i dont know why but it creeped me out for days (i dont know if this had anything to do with it, but it happened a few weeks after trey songz was here performing at the taste of chicago)can anyone help me out
Question #18:
Some women have a false sense of superiority! Would you agree?
Sites like this are starting to make me laugh. Click HereThe whole idea that gender roles are reversing and women are now stronger than men is ridiculous.
Women you ARE NOT, CAN NOT AND WILL NOT be stronger or superior to men.
Here's why. First of all strength is more than just physical. Strength is essentially a control of power and throughout human history men have shown to have greater control of power than women do.
If women want to prove that they are stronger/superior. Then they should
1. Work in construction
2. Fight in war more
3. Become president or prime minister
4. Build great pyramids
5. Build industry
6. Stop using things that men built!!!Shoes, cars, planes, clothes, credit cards, etc.
7. Create groundbreaking music. Do this and a whole bunch of other stuff for at least 1000 years!!! Once you all have COLLECTIVELY done that than you can come at us men and say your stronger/superior to us. Until then cut the crap.
Notice how they say women read better yet men right most books.
Notice how men created a society where women could enjoy an illusion of independence under a monetary system.
Notice how on one side people complain that society is deteriorating yet congratulate women on their success in that deteriorating society!!!
Notice how many of the AMAZON archetypes like Xena created by Robert Tapert, Dark Angel created by James Cameron, Wonder Woman created by William Marston were characters created by men yet women get all hyped up about them as if they're them!!!
Notice how women beat their husbands/boyfriends in wrestling/arm wrestling and use that to prove that women are becoming stronger than men!!!
Notice how women use childbirth as an excuse to say they're stronger!!!
A. Childbirth is a necessary process for human life.
B. Having stronger abdominal doesn't make you stronger over all.
C. Women have higher stamina not higher strength.
D. Women should not use the natural process of childbirth as an example of being stronger than men. Women have to give birth, women have been doing that for thousand of years. WHy is it special now?
lol I feel sorry for the men and women on this particular forum.
Click Here They are weird!!! Sorry ladies you are not superior just because you won a few arm wrestling contests against your p***y whipped husbands.
So has anyone else noticed this or is it just me? Agree or disagree? If so Why?
To Louise C
1. Women should not continue to use the creations of someone that they are now perceiving as weaker/inferior to them.
2. It was men that created the major clothing lines that women spend money on.
To Eyerite : Look at most scripts, screenplays, novels, fact and fiction books, poems, songs, laws even romance novels are written MOSTLY by men!!!
Sorry about that guys. Your right, it was a typo. "WRITE not RIGHT" LMAO!!!
Doug : lol you bogus for that one. X-D
JK : Well then take a nap. Nighty night.
Little Helper : you are the perfect example of the typical arguing woman. Cant truly argue with what I said. Just talking a whole bunch of emotional nonsense because you don't like what I said. FAIL!!!
CRAZY921 : You're not even worth saying anything to. SMH!
Layla : Finally some sense. You see the same evil, clever game being played here. Where feminist think they're winning. It's the elitists. Good perception.
Notshybro. : Good points, very good points. Despite all the things that are against men throughout the human life span. We are still doing more for the greater humanity. What do all these women do after finishing school?
Pleaselo : Very mature of you. I hate the comparisons that these nazi feminists make to seem superior to us men.
L : not even wasting my time.
Did anyone check that site I linked to?
Question #19:
Wrestling Camp? What to Bring?
soo i'm attending the Granby System Wrestling Camp tomorrow, and they've been very hard to contact. i faxed my application to them and the guy said he would e-mail me a list of what to bring. he never did...since i doubt he's ever going to e-mail me before tomorrow, what do i need to bring to wrestling camp besides the basics? workout clothes, wrestling shoes, toothbrush, etc.
I'll be staying in college dorms, so do i need to bring my own pillow and blankets, or just a sleeping bag?
i wish he would've sent the list of what to bring...
Question #20:
How does being forcefully torn out of your sleep cause vertigo?
This is a serious question. For the past 4 years I've been living under a family of very, very selfish people. They have several children and another one on the way. The family, including the kids, constantly jump around (their floor, MY ceiling), they wrestle, they skate their scooters, move furniture constantly, run around in their shoes, blast their stereos and a host of other things.For the past 4 years I've been forcefully ripped out of my sleep by their banging and pounding on my ceiling. Since then I've developed severe vertigo and migraines.
I used to run a 6 minute mile and now I have a hard time walking after living in this apartment. Please tell me how this is occurs.
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